The story is really realistic and the artwork is great. It really resonates with me. Lark was hesitant and confused at first, but with the protagonist's help, she finally chose to embrace her life, full of determination to step into the future with the protagonist. I really like the character Lark. She's sunny but also has her vulnerable side. She gets confused about her life... Just like us ordinary people. When strolling on the beach as a player, I got emotional too. So, it feels like I'm in love (?)
I have a few suggestions that might help with future updates:
① The descriptions could be better. Since they're dragons, there are a lot of human - like action descriptions. I think we can optimize the text. For example, change "bump shoulders" to "bump wings" and "hands" to "claws". Also, when describing characters, adding some details would be good. Like "Lark is grooming her feathers" or "August is playing with his claws". These are nice descriptions.
② This suggestion is a bit subjective. I don't know if others feel the same. But Lark's story is so short! It feels like it just stops suddenly. We were about to go to college, Lark was ready to face life, and she was with the protagonist, but then it ended? I was looking forward to it and ready for more, but it's like stopping before dawn. And Lark is really popular, at least in my circle. So I hope the author can extend Lark's story in the future. At least let me step into college life with her and solve the problem with Lark's grandma. Also, I have a fantasy - to marry Lark. It would be an amazing ending, though it might mean a lot more work for the author. But it's just my fantasy (I really hope for such an ending though!)
③ Gallery. The artwork in this game is really good. Every character is drawn with care. I can get these pictures from the game files, but they're a bit blurry. So I hope there's a gallery with high - definition artwork. I love every character, especially Lark!
I'm sorry I used a translator, so it might be a bit hard for you to read. Even though there's a language barrier between us, my love for your work goes beyond it. Thank you for making me feel the sensation of first love again after such a long time.
So please keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to you creating an account on China's Bilibili platform to post videos, and also opening a sponsorship channel on the "Aifadian" platform！
Like most people in the comments, this was my first time playing a visual novel like this. I’m so glad I gave my first experience to this game.
I have to admit it’s the game that made me cry the most. The story isn’t grand or magical—it’s deeply relatable to real life, especially as a college student. Everything feels so authentic that I could truly empathize with Lark and the "I". The game isn’t complete yet; the version I played only had Lark’s route, but I can’t wait to experience the other four (or more!) characters’ stories.
That said, Lark’s story ends far too abruptly—I want to see more of her (She’s so cute!). There must be more story about Lark after this version, right? After all, They graduate in the spring, but the game is in the winter!
Thank you for your game! I have so much to say but struggle to express it all, and I’m incredibly curious about the game’s future. I was thrilled to see new progress three weeks ago! And I just finished the second time playing!
(PS: I haven’t spoken English in years, so please forgive any mistakes. And I'm sorry for my unreasonable behavior before.)
This is my first time playing a visual novel, and I was completely engrossed in the story. I really enjoyed this game;
it was a wonderful experience.
The meticulous writing and background music that perfectly matched the atmosphere made Lark appear so lively and real. To be honest, when Lark was crying and heartbroken, I truly wanted to rush into the game to embrace and comfort her, while also praying in my heart that I would eventually be with Lark. Thank you for fulfilling my little wish in the romantic ending. I would like to express my gratitude once again to the creators for making this game with such dedication. I will always cherish the story with Lark and look forward to the future storylines of other routes.
(I am a Chinese player who wrote this review using translation software. If there are any errors in the review, please forgive me. Additionally, I really like your game.)
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The story is really realistic and the artwork is great. It really resonates with me. Lark was hesitant and confused at first, but with the protagonist's help, she finally chose to embrace her life, full of determination to step into the future with the protagonist. I really like the character Lark. She's sunny but also has her vulnerable side. She gets confused about her life... Just like us ordinary people. When strolling on the beach as a player, I got emotional too. So, it feels like I'm in love (?)
I have a few suggestions that might help with future updates:
① The descriptions could be better. Since they're dragons, there are a lot of human - like action descriptions. I think we can optimize the text. For example, change "bump shoulders" to "bump wings" and "hands" to "claws". Also, when describing characters, adding some details would be good. Like "Lark is grooming her feathers" or "August is playing with his claws". These are nice descriptions.
② This suggestion is a bit subjective. I don't know if others feel the same. But Lark's story is so short! It feels like it just stops suddenly. We were about to go to college, Lark was ready to face life, and she was with the protagonist, but then it ended? I was looking forward to it and ready for more, but it's like stopping before dawn. And Lark is really popular, at least in my circle. So I hope the author can extend Lark's story in the future. At least let me step into college life with her and solve the problem with Lark's grandma. Also, I have a fantasy - to marry Lark. It would be an amazing ending, though it might mean a lot more work for the author. But it's just my fantasy (I really hope for such an ending though!)
③ Gallery. The artwork in this game is really good. Every character is drawn with care. I can get these pictures from the game files, but they're a bit blurry. So I hope there's a gallery with high - definition artwork. I love every character, especially Lark!
I'm sorry I used a translator, so it might be a bit hard for you to read. Even though there's a language barrier between us, my love for your work goes beyond it. Thank you for making me feel the sensation of first love again after such a long time.
So please keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to you creating an account on China's Bilibili platform to post videos, and also opening a sponsorship channel on the "Aifadian" platform！
I really enjoy this game!
Like most people in the comments, this was my first time playing a visual novel like this. I’m so glad I gave my first experience to this game.
I have to admit it’s the game that made me cry the most. The story isn’t grand or magical—it’s deeply relatable to real life, especially as a college student. Everything feels so authentic that I could truly empathize with Lark and the "I". The game isn’t complete yet; the version I played only had Lark’s route, but I can’t wait to experience the other four (or more!) characters’ stories.
That said, Lark’s story ends far too abruptly—I want to see more of her (She’s so cute!). There must be more story about Lark after this version, right? After all, They graduate in the spring, but the game is in the winter!
Thank you for your game! I have so much to say but struggle to express it all, and I’m incredibly curious about the game’s future. I was thrilled to see new progress three weeks ago! And I just finished the second time playing!
(PS: I haven’t spoken English in years, so please forgive any mistakes. And I'm sorry for my unreasonable behavior before.)
This is my first time playing a visual novel, and I was completely engrossed in the story. I really enjoyed this game;
it was a wonderful experience.
The meticulous writing and background music that perfectly matched the atmosphere made Lark appear so lively and real. To be honest, when Lark was crying and heartbroken, I truly wanted to rush into the game to embrace and comfort her, while also praying in my heart that I would eventually be with Lark. Thank you for fulfilling my little wish in the romantic ending. I would like to express my gratitude once again to the creators for making this game with such dedication. I will always cherish the story with Lark and look forward to the future storylines of other routes.
(I am a Chinese player who wrote this review using translation software. If there are any errors in the review, please forgive me. Additionally, I really like your game.)